6 February 2013
Miss Zu told us to make a comment for other outline. She said that we need to change our outline with others group and leave a comment about their outline. We need to check other group outline if they have made a mistake when complete it. This activity will helping us to get a better mark for outline because we help each other to find some mistake in the outline.
There are some correction that we must do before send the outline. After a long time, this is my outline. But I still not sure this outline is correct or not. Just wait and see what will Miss Zu told us on the next class after the holiday.