30 January 2013
Assalammualaikum…
Today, our class at SL. Miss Zu want to
check introduction for our essay. But before that, she want to see my group
thesis statement because it is not approve yet. So, we present it again with
hope that Miss Zu will accept our thesis statement. Lastly, Miss Zu approved
our thesis statement but we must correct the grammar first.
This is our thesis statement that was accepted by Miss
Zu :
There is no doubt
that the Lynas project should not be continued due to the fact that
it leads to
negative effects towards the environment, however, to a great extent, it is
actually
improving energy efficiency, enhancing environmental protection and
producing micro technology.
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